Free write: family

My family is pretty big. I have a lot of people in it. My mom's name is Dawn and my dad's name is Marc. I have a lot of cousins. Most of them are adults and I don't remember their names. The ones that are around my age are Stephan, age 9, Cazah, age 11, Naomi, age 13, Kyle, age 16, and Samantha, age 18. I have a lot of aunts and uncles. My aunts are Dominique, Nicoya, and Paula. My Uncles are Robert, Fred, and Jimmy. I also have a few grandparents. My Grandmothers are Linda and Patricia. My grandfather's names are Craig, and Floyd. Sadly my last Great grandparent died the summer of '08. I have a lot more people in my family but They are not related by blood. 

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